|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
I dunno how well this will go down, this is an experiment - if it works and if it's funny, there will be more, if not, then it's quite simple - I will destroy the planet. Grunts - Episode 1! I'm just posting a linky here as it does feature Brickarms - standard equipment for my men, as documented elsewhere. http://www.shush-its-secret.demon.co.uk/Tabletown/images/grunts/Grunts001.jpgDr. S.
Visit Tabletown!
|
|
|
|
|
|
Rank: Official Spokesman
Joined: 9/13/2007
Posts: 1,902
Location: Chicago
|
Nice work and use of Brickarms! I'll be curious to see how the story unfolds.
badger
"... and that's when the C.H.U.D.s came at me"
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 12/3/2007
Posts: 58
Location: NY, USA
|
That's pretty awesome, dude. Both the grunts have that minifig head that looks a little like Gordon Freeman, so that was a plus for me. The officer with the anime-style hair, though....
Not the greatest end to the strip, IMO. But still, nice work!
|
|
Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 9/28/2007
Posts: 200
Location: Kiwiland
|
Heh, there's something about this strip that makes me chuckle. Probably the irony. Great work!
 LS DoD appointed Technical Advisor to 2nd Infantry Division's "A" Company and his Flickr"Some folks don't want peace - they want quiet. But until there is justice, there will be no peace and quiet." - Rev. Jesse Jackson (modified)
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
I'm still feeling my way with this, but I've taken on board a lot of the comments so far. Unless this is still too big, this is probably the format I'll adopt. Once I'm happy, I'll probably get a bit more adventurous, but here's episode 2! http://www.shush-its-secret.demon.co.uk/Tabletown/images/grunts/Grunts002.jpgDr. S.
Visit Tabletown!
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 12/3/2007
Posts: 58
Location: NY, USA
|
now THAT was great work. kudos, doc!
Criticism:
Well, the only thing I didn't care for was the text, seemed a little too jumpy. Didn't affect the humor though!
"i gief you ***** out of *****"
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
Russian446 wrote:now THAT was great work. kudos, doc!
Criticism:
Well, the only thing I didn't care for was the text, seemed a little too jumpy. Yeah, that's been noted elsewhere, I won't be doing that any more. Thanks for the honest feedback. Dr. S.
Visit Tabletown!
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/30/2007
Posts: 98
Location: California
|
Hahaha! Those were great, and pretty funny! I really hope to see more of these! Great work! =d>
 My flickr
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/1/2007
Posts: 20
Location: somewhere in the middle of nowhere
|
Loved them cant wait for episode 3! =d>
V I R T U S I U N X I T M O R S N O N S E P A R A B I T
(WHOM VIRTUE HAS UNITED, DEATH SHALL NOT SEPARATE) === For halo 3 easter eggs and glitchs PM me.
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/30/2007
Posts: 98
Location: California
|
Hurray for Grunts! I had a little trouble seeing just what was wrong in the third panel at first though, but when I realized what it was, I laughed. I think you misspelled focused too. But I shouldn't be critiquing too much though because I love these little comics! Great job!
My flickr
|
|
Rank: 'A' Company Commander
Joined: 11/12/2007
Posts: 557
Location: The barren wasteland we call Earth
|
Why was the guy supposed to be shot? He just said "here..."
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
Toy Soldier wrote:Hurray for Grunts! I had a little trouble seeing just what was wrong in the third panel at first though, but when I realized what it was, I laughed. I think you misspelled focused too. But I shouldn't be critiquing too much though because I love these little comics! Great job! I just checked that and it can be spelled either way - I'm in the UK if that makes any difference. kaboom4 wrote:Why was the guy supposed to be shot? He just said "here..." No, that was the General continuing from the previous panel. The guy has painted his helmet and is standing there with a cheesy grin... Dr. S.
Visit Tabletown!
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/26/2007
Posts: 166
Location: Los angeles, California
|
The sarge is a freak =d> . I also like the use of the purple hairstyle on him aswell. Good job =d>
|
|
Rank: Chief Inspector
Joined: 9/16/2007
Posts: 972
Location: Norfolk, VA, USA
|
These cartoons are a bit strange, but funny - I like Episode 3 best so far. Nice work!
"Today you get to say "I told you so."
"Today, I don't want to . . . but I did bloody tell you."
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/1/2007
Posts: 20
Location: somewhere in the middle of nowhere
|
The best one yet!
V I R T U S I U N X I T M O R S N O N S E P A R A B I T
(WHOM VIRTUE HAS UNITED, DEATH SHALL NOT SEPARATE) === For halo 3 easter eggs and glitchs PM me.
|
|
Rank: 'A' Company Commander
Joined: 11/12/2007
Posts: 557
Location: The barren wasteland we call Earth
|
madmodder wrote:The best one yet! Couldn't have said it better myself! ;)
|
|
Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 10/5/2007
Posts: 160
Location: UK
|
|
|
|
Guest |
