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Randomness
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:28:21 PM

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Here our loveable spy casually walks away from the bomb, pistol and detonator in hand.





Does the lighting set the mood? Or did I screw up?

What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
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Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:28:21 PM
MiPod
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:31:57 PM

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Well, I'd suggest a little more light... It seems a bit too dark.

Other than that: GREAT VIG, RANDOMNESS!!! Four stars for you! :)

MiPod

P.S. Clever use of the Monopod. ;)

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Randomness
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:34:18 PM

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MiPod wrote:
Well, I'd suggest a little more light... It seems a bit too dark.

Other than that: GREAT VIG, RANDOMNESS!!! Four stars for you! :)

MiPod

P.S. Clever use of the Monopod. ;)


Thanks! I meant the lighting to be dark, to make it more of a "Closing time" effect. Is it too dark?

What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
HSP2
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:40:20 PM

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Great vig, but one question: what's on the other side of the wall? Me wanty backstory!
For some reason I really like the red light on the bomb.
By the way, good luck in the contest!

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Randomness
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:46:02 PM

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HSP2 wrote:
Great vig, but one question: what's on the other side of the wall? Me wanty backstory!
For some reason I really like the red light on the bomb.
By the way, good luck in the contest!


Sigh, Story time everyone!
Joshua Merlak quickly asessed the target area. Yup, he thought to himself as he surveyed the beacon he had left while visiting the museum in North korea. On the oppisite side of this wall, there was blueprints of the latest nuclear technology, which could end this stalemate on a bad note. He placed the bomb, smiling as the light began to blink. Who would have thought that something as simple as a light could tell you how you would win the war, he thought. He causiously walked away, G-90 pistol in one hand, detonator in the other. He pressed the detonator...

To be continued...


What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
snake776
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 8:53:33 PM

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Good job randomness! I like the spy he's really cool.
MiPod
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 9:08:14 PM

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Randomness wrote:
Thanks! I meant the lighting to be dark, to make it more of a "Closing time" effect. Is it too dark?

It just looks a little bit blurred... (Not the photo, just the lighting) If the darkness was a little more... 'Concentrated', it would be fine. Perhaps try a totally dark room with a LED shining down on the guy? It highlights him, but still keeps that sense of murkiness.

Anyway, I like it!

MiPod

"What do iPods and guns have in common?" You ask? Well, if I told you that, I'm afraid I'd have to kill you! ; )
Gotta Love a Mac... 
Randomness
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 9:15:40 PM

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MiPod wrote:
Randomness wrote:
Thanks! I meant the lighting to be dark, to make it more of a "Closing time" effect. Is it too dark?

It just looks a little bit blurred... (Not the photo, just the lighting) If the darkness was a little more... 'Concentrated', it would be fine. Perhaps try a totally dark room with a LED shining down on the guy? It highlights him, but still keeps that sense of murkiness.

Anyway, I like it!

MiPod


Thanks, I might try that...

What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
kaboom4
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 10:01:09 PM

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Nice job! I like the light on the bomb. I read the backstory. I guess Josh likes to blow up things:

Joshua Merlak wrote:
placed the bomb, smiling as the light began to blink


brickdude7
Posted: Friday, April 18, 2008 10:47:55 PM

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Looks great! The light looks good for me, but hey, what do I know about lighting.

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Randomness
Posted: Saturday, April 19, 2008 12:04:10 AM

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Thanks everyone! Appreciate the comments!

What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
jhawker95
Posted: Saturday, April 19, 2008 11:05:51 AM

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Sweet vig randomness! Awesome use of monopod! One critique though, replace the M6 with a PPK tactical, but other than that, its perfect!

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soman
Posted: Saturday, April 19, 2008 11:08:10 AM

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You sould of given the spy a decal but other then that its good.

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Randomness
Posted: Saturday, April 19, 2008 3:47:09 PM

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jhawker95 wrote:
Sweet vig randomness! Awesome use of monopod! One critique though, replace the M6 with a PPK tactical, but other than that, its perfect!


Errmmm, I lost my PPK tactical, so, yeah... Oh and I kept the spy bland (Woithout decal) just because I like him completely black...

What's Up with suicide Bombers? All they do is go AYEYAYEAYE! *Boom!* Yeah, Good job idiot, I betcha can't do it again!- Jeff Dunham
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