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Not bad, however, I would suggest you put more effert into the suroundings. Red isn't the best colour for a wall, unless it's supposed to be a bathed in blood. Also, your pictures are a tad over the mark. The limit is 400X400, while yours are a bit over 500X400. Just thought I'd give you a heads up!
"How am I going to stop some mean Mother Hubbard from tearing me a structurally superfluous new behind? The answer... is a gun. And if that don't work, use more gun" - Meet the Engineer
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It's a good vig, and I like the terrorist, but I don't think peach and yellow go well together.
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Thanks for the tips both of you. :D
Oh and WisrthanU, I just wanted to use a guy with a strap on the face and saw that head and used it! :)
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That is good! And what kind of shotgun is it supposed to be?
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There great! just ask you a question what is a vignette?
I can see the dark side of milk
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brickdude7 wrote:That is good! And what kind of shotgun is it supposed to be? It's actually an SWAT team assualt rifle I made up. Only used by the SWAT! :) A vignette is a fancy word for scene. Will made a topic about it on the front page. Check it out to see some good vig tips! :D [MOD - Do not double-post, use the edit function. - obxcrew]
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portaldude wrote:brickdude7 wrote:That is good! And what kind of shotgun is it supposed to be? It's actually an SWAT team assualt rifle I made up. Only used by the SWAT! :) Good work on the SWAT team assualt rifle!! Looks great!:)
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Pretty nice, although it is a little plain. I would try making the ground more like a SWAT friendly environment, such as a city. The TLC base plate is a little dull, so I would try making it out of multiple plates. Other than that, its great!
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