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Jango Jordan
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 4:28:57 PM

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Location: Utah
I did this, Or would have done it, For a contest on my forum.
I say Would have, Because a judge can't enter a contest that they're judging. Oh well, It was fun to make!




The little 1x1 cones are representing Bullets.
Thanks for looking! (Obxcrew should coin that phrase.)

If you try to fail, and succeed, which have you done?
Sponsor
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 4:28:57 PM
Horatio
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 5:00:56 PM

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Joined: 3/1/2008
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Location: Where ever Waldo is...
Hmmm... what exactly is going on in it?


"He looked bigger when I couldn't see him."
-Jayne Cobb
ScubaCJ
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 5:19:32 PM

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Joined: 3/3/2008
Posts: 82
Location: Middlesbrough, North east england
I like how he's been shot at as he's charging across no man's land... Is that what's happening? I still like though.
kaboom4
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 5:45:52 PM

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Joined: 11/12/2007
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Location: The barren wasteland we call Earth
I would think that he's sprintng across a dusty battlefield towards a trench with an MG firing at him? I would guess this is WWII for the Thompson, and somewhere in North Africa during 1942-3 campaign. Judging by him attacking a trench, this would probably be in the Second Battle of El Alamein, or the Devil's Garden minefield. Am I correct?

Estimating aside, nice job! I like the bullets kicking up around his feet.

Jango Jordan
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 6:49:49 PM

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Location: Utah
Actually, He is sprinting along a beach in africa being pursued by several enemy troops. Sorry for the confusion, I had to go to my Literature class and forgot to add the summary.

If you try to fail, and succeed, which have you done?
kaboom4
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 6:52:38 PM

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Jango Jordan wrote:
Actually, He is sprinting along a beach in africa being pursued by several enemy troops. Sorry for the confusion, I had to go to my Literature class and forgot to add the summary.


So, I am at least right about the North Africa part and the Second Battle of El Alamein.

Jango Jordan
Posted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008 7:17:38 PM

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Joined: 1/2/2008
Posts: 90
Location: Utah
Yep! I like doing Vignettes in Africa.

If you try to fail, and succeed, which have you done?
Brickfan93
Posted: Thursday, April 17, 2008 4:39:51 PM


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Location: South Carolina, USA
Now that I know what's going on, I like it! Great vig, Jango Jordan. I love the bullets kicking up at his feet.

Cheers!

"Time to let 'Ol Painless out of the bag!"
brickdude7
Posted: Thursday, April 17, 2008 10:56:28 PM

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Location: Reclaiming Michigan from the SPLAC
Not bad, not bad at all, and im a little confused here, are there bullets kicking up around his feet?

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Delta Force
Posted: Thursday, April 17, 2008 11:12:44 PM

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brickdude7 wrote:
Not bad, not bad at all, and im a little confused here, are there bullets kicking up around his feet?

Yes the yellow upside down cone thing represents bullets hitting the ground. If only he a M1 helmet.


A M1919A6 30 Caliber Machine Gun firing 400-600 rounds a minute, with a bipod, carrying handle, stock, and 100 rounds of 30-06 in a belt! Wait did I lose you?
Jango Jordan
Posted: Thursday, April 17, 2008 11:23:54 PM

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Joined: 1/2/2008
Posts: 90
Location: Utah
Delta Force wrote:
brickdude7 wrote:
Not bad, not bad at all, and i'm a little confused here, are there bullets kicking up around his feet?

Yes the yellow upside down cone thing represents bullets hitting the ground. If only he had an M1 helmet.


Yeah, I'm going to order a few when my next order comes around. Thanks for Looking and leaving C&C!

If you try to fail, and succeed, which have you done?
jzlspike
Posted: Tuesday, April 22, 2008 9:52:04 PM

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Joined: 9/28/2007
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Location: Pant's Time!!
I don't like it, for one I think you need a better face. Besides that maybe try adding more depth to the terrain.

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soman
Posted: Thursday, April 24, 2008 2:22:56 PM

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Location: London
Its quite good like the detail in it even know I don't know whats going on.

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