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Joined: 2/10/2008
Posts: 681
Location: Onalaska, Wisconsin
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Here is my gagnster, he has an Uzi and an M24. Link
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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 6/2/2008
Posts: 77
Location: Ohio, USA
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Rank: Specialist
Joined: 7/26/2008
Posts: 291
Location: California,USA
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Its ok but I agree with BAM that his arms and legs should be shorter
Please let me shoot you.
Life isn't worth living if there's nothing worth living for.
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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 8/31/2008
Posts: 49
Location: on planet earth
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It looks good(better than I can draw, but I guess everything is better than mine). The legs could use some work, ezpiecally the feet.
If a man does his best, what else is there?-General George Patton
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Joined: 7/20/2008
Posts: 5
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Honestly, it's bad.
But I'll give some constructive critisism.
1.Try looking at a minifig while drawing, this will do wonders.
2.If you have trouble making straight lines use a ruler.
3.Try to make him symmetrical.
4. Make him do something like shooting or reloading. (optional)
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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 5/27/2008
Posts: 43
Location: North Carolina
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jaredrenza wrote:Honestly, it's bad.
But I'll give some constructive critisism.
1.Try looking at a minifig while drawing, this will do wonders.
2.If you have trouble making straight lines use a ruler.
3.Try to make him symmetrical.
4. Make him do something like shooting or reloading. (optional) Why is it bad? This is Brickarms Inspired Artwork, you do not have to draw a minifig with Brickarms in hand, even though that's what most tend to do. He drew a Gangster. Maybe it's a real person, or a cartoon drawing of a real person. Maybe it's his view of a minifig that has come to life. In any case, Brickarms inspired him to draw the picture, and I say good job. I can clearly see the choice of Brickarms that inspired you Mandalorian. One cannot give constructive criticism without first asking the artist what he was going for. I could give Picasso some art lessons too if I didn't already understand the motivation behind his work.
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Rank: Specialist
Joined: 8/9/2008
Posts: 463
Location: A small town in Utah
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I think it's quite good, Mandalorian. The Uzi was a nice choice, and the M24 was good too. The legs could just be a tad shorter, but other than that, it's great. Good work!
Sgt Striker
Bunnies are taking over the world!
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