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Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 7/22/2008
Posts: 522
Location: Nieuwegein, Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands
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Hey guys here's my next vig. It's about a group of bandits who have almost completed their mission to free their boss from going to prison. http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=338174Right on the middle of the day the group of bandits managed to make the prison van stop by shooting the front tire. The group broke the back door, shot the guard there and escorted their boss back to the black van. They are now shooting at the driver and the other guard trying to get away with their boss. hope you guys like it. (to mods: I don't know if this is an moc or a vig)
"Rommel, you fool, I've read you're book!" -Generall G.S. Patton <-- Fallout 3 the best game so far! Wohoo! Oh By the way, I joined Flickr. And the BrickArms group there. Nice eh? Hey look I got a Flickr. Oh hey and also a Brickshelf.
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Rank: Specialist
Joined: 6/11/2008
Posts: 436
Location: The small town of Earth
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I like it, but I think you can take this and make it much more interesting.
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Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 7/22/2008
Posts: 522
Location: Nieuwegein, Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands
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well post you're suggestions and idea's and i'll try to make it in the vig.
"Rommel, you fool, I've read you're book!" -Generall G.S. Patton <-- Fallout 3 the best game so far! Wohoo! Oh By the way, I joined Flickr. And the BrickArms group there. Nice eh? Hey look I got a Flickr. Oh hey and also a Brickshelf.
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Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 2/10/2008
Posts: 681
Location: Onalaska, Wisconsin
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Very nice! This vig is very well made.
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Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 7/22/2008
Posts: 522
Location: Nieuwegein, Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands
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I know thanks. But Master Animator is right it does miss something, more detail perhaps? You got any idea's?
"Rommel, you fool, I've read you're book!" -Generall G.S. Patton <-- Fallout 3 the best game so far! Wohoo! Oh By the way, I joined Flickr. And the BrickArms group there. Nice eh? Hey look I got a Flickr. Oh hey and also a Brickshelf.
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Rank: Specialist
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Location: The small town of Earth
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Henk De Vries wrote:...it does miss something, more detail perhaps? Yes I think that it is missing some life from it. you should maybe make people running in horror, and maybe a dead civilian because that's what usually happens. Also, if there was glass in that shop window you made, take off some bricks, and make the police vehicle seem like it crashed into it. Hope that helps!
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Rank: Elite Commando
Joined: 7/22/2008
Posts: 522
Location: Nieuwegein, Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands
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Hey thanks, those are realy good idea's I shall work that out. I shall make pictures of it and post it probebly this evening. (in the Netherlands it is evening then) Thanks again. =) Edit: so here is my reedited version it's much better then the last one: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=338382The black stipes on the road must represent drift or slip stripes from the tires of the cars, the guy on the bench in the back has its hand shot of but you've probebly have seen that =). Hope you like this one better. Henk de Vries
"Rommel, you fool, I've read you're book!" -Generall G.S. Patton <-- Fallout 3 the best game so far! Wohoo! Oh By the way, I joined Flickr. And the BrickArms group there. Nice eh? Hey look I got a Flickr. Oh hey and also a Brickshelf.
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