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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 7/20/2008
Posts: 40
Location: USA
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This is my first brickfilm it's fast yes but I want to know what you guys think i'm in progress of making another film give me helpful comments and support's always nice so hope you enjoy (it's nothing special) thanks for watching THE LAST STAND
Life, is, but, a, dream! for the dead and well I, I won't go down by myself but I'll go down with my friends [143t] My Flickr
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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 4/18/2008
Posts: 139
Location: New York
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It's an ok movie, but it could use some work. I now its your first movie and all but try to improve. Maybe use a good stop motion prgram instead of just shooting pictures and putting in sounds.
Now you're thinking with portals.
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Rank: Specialist
Joined: 7/26/2008
Posts: 255
Location: California,USA
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Its pretty good for your first try.
This is wonderful GENIUS! You just had to get those airstrike cordinates wrong didn't you, now were dead and its all your fault! Or did they poison that hotdog......
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Rank: Advanced Member
Joined: 9/16/2007
Posts: 104
Location: VicLUG
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Hmmm, not a brick film really but a brick slideshow. Some suggestions:
- Slow down the refresh rate on some of the shots. The pictures were whizzing by too fast.
- The occasional "title card" for narration like in silent movies/comics would really help set up what's happening.
- Take good photographs then try to add atmospheric lighting in Photoshop or something. Using lighting effects in photos is difficult and many of the pictures were washed out (did you use a flash?)
On the plus side it does tell a story which is the key element. There was even some humour which is always good. As a first effort it is pretty entertaining. I look forward to the next one.
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